Your next door neighbour owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night. Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter: • Your reason for writing • What you would like to happen • A nice, respectful style

Dear Mr Raj I would like to bring your attention to the problem facing your puppy the whole day and night for the past 10 days. Here, I am informing the issues we are facing
also
suggesting some needed action from you to avoid the same. The pup barking throughout the day and night with
this
we are facing a lot of disturbance in our daily activities.
In addition
to that, our kid is not having the proper sleep which is creating much pressure on his mother to handle him.
Also
, she is unable to complete her activities on the day and as you are aware that we are working in the mornings and we need peaceful sleep at the night but we can’t with
this
. To control
this
situation, I want you to take proper precautionary methods to control the barking of the puppy.
Firstly
, look into the sufficient tasty and much-loved food take-in to get required rest to the pup in the days.
Secondly
, try to take the pup out for some time walking
this
will help to reduce the stress of the pet.
Finally
, consult the veterinary doctor if
this
problem still remains. I hope you will take solid action to resolve
this
issue to avoid the problems faced by us. If any assistance is needed, please get back. Yours Faithfully, Krishna Nutakki
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • disrupted
  • challenging
  • appreciate
  • solutions
  • training
  • anti-bark collars
  • excessive barking
  • resources
  • well-being
  • distress
  • amicably
  • cooperation
  • concern
  • neighbourly relations
  • understanding
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