In
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scenario, everyone has a dream to live in big
cities
.
Although
, it is sometimes thought
people
have more
health
issues to live in the metropolitan areas. In my opinion, I considered that living in big
cities
have both positives and
effects
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people
's
health
.
There are several reasons why
people
are getting more
health
problems while they are living in urban areas. The
first
and foremost important thing is that increasing pollution. There
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too much traffic congestion in
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of
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use of personal vehicles.
In addition
,
cities
do not have more
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to keep air pollution
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control.
Moreover
, most of the trees are
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down to construct tall buildings.
Therefore
,
people
can not get fresh air.
Another point to consider living in
cities
is not good for human's
health
means expanding industries. There are many factories in
cities
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toxic gases from their chimneys.
For instance
, in one survey has conducted in the Uk, toxic gases are terrible for human's
health
and they can be prevented
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,
people
may have
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because of breathing problems.
Hence
,
people
would have various detrimental diseases.
On the other hand
,
people
have many options to fit their
health
when they are living in urban areas.
Firstly
, there are many
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available and
people
go on
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over there.
Secondly
, some
people
are doing morning
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and
to keep
themCorrect pronoun usage
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healthy.
Finally
, they may have
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diet.
In conclusion, the life expectancy
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less in
cities
as
people
are
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numerous diseases, but there are some ways to live
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a healthy life and it should not neglect.