some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. others however say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. discuss both views and give your opinion.
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, in some countries, football parks may be common in the cities but in rural areas, you will find a few.more places for sporting activities must be created.
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, educating the public on the need for sports should be a major concern. I will say the government must focus more on education and even if few places are available, individuals will utilize them.Linking Words
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