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Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local films?

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Nowadays,
public
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 like to watch more non-native language
films
 rather than regional
films
.
The movies
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Movies
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 from other languages
such
 as Korean, Spanish, English, and Chinese have become more popular in native places. There could be several reasons for
this
 trend, and it is good if domestic
films
 get support from their governments. There
are
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multitude
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a multitude
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 of reasons why people show more interest in foreign
films
. The
first
 reason is quality, budget and more thoughtful content. Considering the immense significance of visualization for a movie, the producers of that
film
 should spend
adequate
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 budget on graphics, rich costumes, settings, transportation and other animations. And, the stories based on extra-terrestrial knowledge, science, fiction and
adventurous
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 are more interesting subjects. The
second
 reason is cast and crew. In view of economic perspective, they choose
most
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the most
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 famous actors to portray characters to grab public attention. To epitome, "Avatar" is the Hollywood
film
 which grossed
the
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a
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 profit of 1 billion during the
first
 week because of only visuals, strong subject and casting. To produce
such
a
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big budget
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 action movies and graphics-based movies,
the
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time is the challenging factor. The local directors
also
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are also
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 capable of creating
such
films
 but the producers don't come forward to take up
project
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projects
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 due to fear of loss and
a
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long-time management. Here, in
this
 case, if
government
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the government
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 allows distributors for unlimited shows per day or premier shows without restrictions during the
first
 week and the financial aid for
film
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the film
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 while making,
local
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the local
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film
 industry can generate revenue as expected.
For instance
, Switzerland invested 50% of the share
on
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in
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 the
film
 "Vikings" to promote tourism. In conclusion, there is a huge demand for employment in the
film
 industry, so the government should provide support in the growth of regional
film
 industries.
Therefore
, native countries can
also
 produce
such
films
.
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