Being able to speak a foreign language is an advantage these days. Some people think that children should start learning a foreign language at primary school, while others think children should begin in secondary school. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It is undeniable that learning a foreign
language
is necessary for
children
. Particularly, speaking
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language
will give benefits to them. Some people believe that
children
should learn
this
at primary
school
, whereas others
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agree
that
children
should start learning new languages in secondary
school
. In
this
essay, both of these viewpoints will be discussed before giving my opinion. On the one hand, there are two main reasons why some people think that learning a foreign
language
at primary
school
is better than in secondary
school
.
Firstly
, to talk and be able to communicate
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foreign
language
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and effort. On top of that, the study from Yale's university reveals that the sooner
children
learn foreign languages, the better speakers they become.
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, many adults said that they found it harder to study a foreign
language
when they grew up. Another reason is that there are only
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subjects to study at primary
school
, so it is
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suitable time to start learning and absorbing new languages.
On the other hand
, others think that it is unnecessary to do that too early. In fact, it is not too late to start learning it in secondary
school
because ages
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. That means the most vital factor to
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a foreign
language
is
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persistence
.
For example
, one old lady in the south of Thailand started learning Chinese when she was 45 years old, but she could speak like a native speaker.
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is because she studies hard and kept
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.
Besides
,
children
should have more time to enjoy
thier
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their
life during studying at primary
school
instead
of studying too hard. In conclusion, both sides have pros and cons.
Nevertheless
, I think it would be better for
children
to start learning a
foriegn
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foreign
language
at primary
school
, as it is easier for them to memorize new words and
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new things.
Moreover
, it will give them to access more information while they are studying.
Thus
, they will get a better opportunity if they can speak and read a
second
language
fluently.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cognitive development
  • globalized world
  • language acquisition
  • pronunciation
  • critical thinking
  • culturally aware
  • language interference
  • motivated approach
  • curriculum demands
  • natural learning abilities
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