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In many countries plastic shopping bags are the main source of rubbish, causing pollution on land and in the water. Some people think they should be banned. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In general, most
people
 tend to
view
things
 differently, even whether rubbish pollution in the world is happening both on land and in the water. Several
people
 believe that
plastic
 shopping
bags
 are one of the main causes of
this
 problem and should be banned. I agree somewhat with
this
 opinion and
this
 essay will give reasons that will help support my point of
view
. On the one hand, It is undeniable that nowadays many societies thought that
plastic
 shopping
bags
 are the main source of pollution and should be banned.
Plastic
bags
 are
things
 that are hard to destroy, they may need more than a hundred years if didn't use other ways to destroy them.
For example
,
plastic
 made our life easier so everyone uses it every day in their daily life so the earth will have lots of
plastic
bags
 and how to destroy them? They
also
 have some ways to demolish it
such
 as a burn or bury it, but it not only made more pollution but
also
 had an effect on our health.
On the other hand
, many
people
 go outside to travel or shopping in their daily life. Using a
plastic
 shopping bag is one of the easiest ways to shopping in everywhere,
for example
, shopping for
things
 that you accidentally met at the department store or buying some foods and ingredients for dinner, the
things
 that made you feel more convenient is a
plastic
 bag. Some
people
also
 reuse
plastic
bags
 that they receive from the stores again. In conclusion, it is hard to make all
people
view
things
 in the same way, even in the case of the
plastic
bags
 should be banned or not. Some
people
 may agree
that is
 destroying our earth.
However
, to me, I agree to a limited extent that everyone shouldn't use
plastic
 shopping
bags
. The cases and examples mentioned above have supported my point of
view
 to the best.
Submitted by nppwrs on

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