With an increasing overweight population some people think universities should make sport a compulsory module on all degree courses. To what extent do you agree?

According to the rise of the number of
obesity
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people
, some
people
believe that
sport
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sports
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courses should be included in
universities
courses for all
degree
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. I firmly believe that
this
is an excellent way to solve
this
problem. In the following paragraphs, I will give my reasons to support my idea.
Firstly
,
sport
plays an important role
for
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improving
one
's health, so in order to lose
weight
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one
should do more
workout
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. By enforcing all students to
enroll
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sport
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courses will give them a lot of benefits.
However
, the direct result that they will receive is being fit and firm.
For instance
, some
universities
students did not care about going to the gym or playing sports. They just focused
at
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studying, and they sat all
days
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.
Consequently
, they gained
weight
.
Therefore
,
universities
should promote and require all students to play
sport
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in order to get rid of
this
issue.
Secondly
, studying at
universities
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level
is difficult. It may cause
the
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high
level
of
stress
. Many researchers revealed that
stress
was
one
of the key factors that led
people
gaining
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more
weight
.
Nevertheless
,
one
can reduce the
stress
level
by playing sports.
For example
, playing soccer with friends can help
people
to be more relaxed. It will
stregthen
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strengthen
both physically and mentally.
Thus
,
universities
should add
this
course as a compulsory module to reduce
level
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of
stress
. In conclusion, it is
the
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good idea for
univerisities
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universities
to add
sport
as
mandatory
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a mandatory
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course, since it could lead to many benefits
such
as
weight
loss, healthy, and reducing
stress
.
Therefore
, I totally agree with
this
idea.
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