In spite of advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this case? What can be done about this problem?

Food

stravation

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starvation

hits millions around the world despite the advancements in agricultural technology and land's irrigation techniques.

This

,in part, is a result of the emerging climate changes and of the corrupted governments in the affected

countries

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.

Thus

, the solution

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hunger

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dilemma requires urgent actions at different levels, and

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essay will shed the light on some of the causing factors and how to to be mitigated. The Earth's

temrature

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temperature

has reached unprecedented levels ever,

this

has led to

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drastic natural disasters

such

as floods and drought ,

subsequently

more and more farm's lands had

being

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destroyed or

degregaded

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degraded

and

million

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of tonnes of

food

crops had

drawned

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drawn

drowned

or

rottened

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rotten

rotted

.

Cilamte

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Climate

change ,

therefore

, that have been caused by the dangerous levels of

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greenhouse

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green house

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greenhouse

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gases emissions especially carbon

dioxoide

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dioxide

, are to be tackled urgently by placing

legislations

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to cutting down fossil fuel use and replace it with renewable energy resources, mainly wind and

hydro power

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hydropower

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.

This

is the

first

step , in my opinion, to save the rest of the green areas valid for crops production and to slow down the fast rhythm of

food

starvation invasion. The other cause of the rising numbers of hungry

people

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is the economic and financial governments' policies in many developing

countries

where most of the citizens there are suffering from

poverity

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poverty

,

food

deprivation, and malnutrition, while a minority of

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corrupted politics enjoy the nation's wealth and natural resources.

This

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injustice

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unjustice

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has

lead

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in some areas to a devastating civil war that

aggrevated

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aggravated

the

food

insecurity and soared the numbers of starving

people

, children

in particular

. For that reason ,

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urgent action had to be taken by

humanitarian

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organization

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organizations

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,

such

as the Red Cross, UNICEF ( United Nation International Children Emergency Fund), Action Against Hunger, and so, in order to provide

people

in

disastered

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disaster

disasters

countries

with

food

or

food

supplements and drinking water. The more these

organization

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move

fasterto

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faster to

faster

help, the higher numbers of

inncoent

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innocent

hungery

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hungry

people

will continue to live. In conclusion, in efforts to

conqure

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conquer

hunger

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the fabulous developments in agricultural techniques

is

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considered almost useless if there were no urgent and

concomittant

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concomitant

action to slow down the devastating climate changes

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and to support the repressed and

malnuritioed

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malnutrition

people

in the under-developed

countries

.