Many believe that it is important to protect all wild animals, while others think that it is important to protect some,not all of them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Today wildlife conservation is one of the concerns in all parts of the world. Some argue that it is only necessary to protect certain identified species. From my point of view, I agree with the idea of protecting all
animals
because each animal has its own role on earth.
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endangered wildlife and requires more conservation effort than Remove the article
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animals
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as insects and rats, which can be devastating to the environment. Not only that, today the human population is increasing, so the area on earth will increase, Linking Words
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. To feed an animal sanctuary, we pay about a million dollars a month. Meanwhile, we should use that money to do more useful things Linking Words
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as supporting the poor, upgrading equipment and infrastructure.
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living things. The environment and natural Linking Words
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are grown and developed by the food chain. If we only focus on preserving one species, Use synonyms
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can cause an imbalance in the food chain and have serious consequences. Linking Words
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, if you are too conserving, saving birds, keeping them in cages and feeding them ready-made foods, the insects will thrive, which will be detrimental not only to us but Linking Words
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In short, humans should try to protect as many Use synonyms
animals
as possible to maintain ecological balance. The government needs to put in place more policies to ensure wildlife is not driven to extinction.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite