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Many criminals re-offend after they have been punished. Why do some people continue to commit crimes after they have been punished, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

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It is a fact that punishment cannot always stop
criminals
 from committing more crimes. Several
reasons
 might explain why these
criminals
 break the law repeatedly and I believe that government can place these issues. There are several
reasons
 why these
criminals
 continue to violate the laws. The most important one is that they cannot find a
job
 which can afford their daily life when they go back to society again. One of the
reasons
 is they lack skills and knowledge, so many employers will not hire them. And the criminal records on their resume add difficulty to them finding a
job
.
Thus
, those people have to commit crimes again to survive. Another point I wish to make is that some feasible ways the government can try to deal with
this
 problem. Primarily, the prison can open vocational training courses
such
 as baking, car repairing and basic computer skills for
criminals
.
Thus
,
criminals
 can find a
job
 to maintain their life when they leave jails.
For instance
, most of Mainland China’s prisons open professional skill training courses to
criminals
. After finishing these courses, they will arrange to attend an internship with a salary.
Therefore
, if most
criminals
 can get a
job
 when they go back to society, they would not choose to break out rules again. To sum
up
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 everything that has been stated so far, I am trying to analyse the
reasons
.
Also
, I believe that these questions cannot deal with in the short term;
however
, if the government consists of applying these suggestions for a decade, these phenomena can be largely reduced.
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