Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentence other, however believe there are better alternative way of reducing crime discuss both view and give your opinion ?
It the irrefutable that
crime
is a serious and growing problem in the world. nobody is born to be a criminal but some circumstances become such
as that crime
happened. Why do crime
? Several types of crime
in the world. Some crimes there such
as who punished by the government
whether hard law made by lawmakers. Both the discussion should be properly clear reaching a conclusion.
To commence with, compulsion is the big reason to do attempt crime
because, when someone does face trouble which are never solution to try hundred times then
parson make do crime
. on the Other hand
, social media being a very bad effect on youngers. few sites are useful for every person as well as for development but some sites are greatly bad which is saw wrong way. For example
, in 2010 that time was major happened with the girl. that girl was rapped by four boys who were only teenagers. The boys were punished by the government
and longer time in prison. That boy Was how now about rapes only the reason social media. Moreover
, some individuals are earning money the wrong way as like selling drugs alcohol and other dirty things then
they are always punished by the government
.
Furthermore
, assuming that, awareness is the big factor to reduce crime
then
they never know that what will the result of this
crime
. Therefore
, the government
should make a major Law which is great for consequences such
as, only allowing useful social sites which improve general knowledge development and good things. They should provide awareness camps in schools and colleges which have knowledge about crime
punishment and also
make rules. They should ban wrong movies and songs that encourage violence.
In conclusion , although
, crime
is very high risk and major problem awareness is only one way to reduce crime
nevertheless
, those who make crimes then
they punished by the government
are also
punished behind the jail.Submitted by naresh on
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