Children can learn effectively by watching television. Therefore, they should be encouraged to watch television regularly at home and at school. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
These days, some believe that many learners are able to gain knowledge by watching
television
and that is
why they should all be inspired to have this
chance on a regular basis. I totally disagree with this
statement because pupils could be spend
their time for nothing and Change the verb form
be spending
also
, there are so many devices and gadgets where students
are well educated.
First
of all, spreading the idea of watching television
is inappropriate since all learners have been wasting their time anyway and it makes them dull. Furthermore
, the effects of technological gadgets on students
hugely impact on
behaviour and desire to learn. Change preposition
apply
Therefore
, older people ought to control and motivate them to study well. For example
, there was an experiment of understanding information by scientists a decade ago. While one student had to watch an article on television
another had to read it. As a
result
Add a comma
,result
students
who had read the article got more information. So it means that it is not a good option to increase the effectiveness of studying by watching.
Second
of all, watching television
also
has benefits and students
may watch news about environment, politics or climate change that is
why pupils should not be restricted. However
, parents should control all information which
kids receive because kids do not know what they have to know and what they need to avoid. As an example, there are so many sports stars all around the world and, Correct pronoun usage
that
actually
at the beginning their parents support them. If they had not supported them since childhood, they would not have been famous.
In conclusion, Add a comma
,actually
students
who are encouraged to watch television
regularly may learn beneficially that is
why students
should be motivated to watch regularly both at home and at school. I disagree with this
statement. My viewpoint is that students
ought to study equally by reading and watching.Submitted by Ozy_boy on
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