Children can learn effectively by watching television. Therefore, they should be encouraged to watch television regularly at home and at school. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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These days, some believe that many learners are able to gain knowledge by watching
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why they should all be inspired to have
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chance on a regular basis. I totally disagree with
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statement because pupils could
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their time for nothing and
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, there are so many devices and gadgets where
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are well educated.
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of all, spreading the idea of watching
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is inappropriate since all learners have been wasting their time anyway and it makes them dull.
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, the effects of technological gadgets on
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hugely impact
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behaviour and desire to learn.
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, older people ought to control and motivate them to study well.
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, there was an experiment of understanding information by scientists a decade ago. While one student had to watch an article on
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another had to read it.
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students
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who had read the article got more information. So it means that it is not a good option to increase the effectiveness of studying by watching.
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of all, watching
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has benefits and
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may watch news about environment, politics or climate change
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why pupils should not be restricted.
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, parents should control all information
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kids receive because kids do not know what they have to know and what they need to avoid. As an example, there are so many sports stars all around the world and,
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at the beginning their parents support them. If they had not supported them since childhood, they would not have been famous. In conclusion,
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who are encouraged to watch
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regularly may learn beneficially
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why
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should be motivated to watch regularly both at home and at school. I disagree with
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statement. My viewpoint is that
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ought to study equally by reading and watching.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • passive
  • sedentary
  • limit
  • creativity
  • imagination
  • educational content
  • expose
  • different cultures
  • perspectives
  • negative effects
  • behavior
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