In order to study at university students are required to pay expensive tuition fees. Not all student can afford them so somr think that university education should be free. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, universities charge high for study

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not able to bear the expense.Upon

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,issue some public believe that university schooling ought to be non-

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statement since chargeless

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will change the entire profile of an individual and society.

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,it brings equality between rich enlistment and poor enlistment to have

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from all perspectives.

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,the government of Canada established a law for

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to obtain an education without giving any payment.

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don't

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need to spend their valuable time doing a job for earning money to pay

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more time to study promptly unless they do part-time jobs.Giving

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is not considered as the kindness of anyone but

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it is a right to have for

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in all aspects since charging money for

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is ridiculous. Since the culture provide is chargeless to all

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,the society and the country status will be changed.The free learning system will be raised many graduates and skilled professionals in future and

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the nation gain tremendous economic growth.

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, the economic ratio is at a higher level in Canada after they implemented costless

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rules in their country.In some places government already started the process to learn

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free of cost and their

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achieved a hundred per cent in terms of pass out ratio. In conclusion,education must be feasible for all students and avoid the discrimination system in between

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.The government must take proper actions on

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issue and empower education equal to all.