In order to study at university students are required to pay expensive tuition fees. Not all student can afford them so somr think that university education should be free. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, universities charge high for study
therefore
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,most of the
recruitment
are
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not able to bear the expense.Upon
this
,issue some public believe that university schooling ought to be non-
chargable
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chargeable
charge
for
admission
.In my opinion,I agree with
this
statement since chargeless
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will change the entire profile of an individual and society.
Firstly
,it brings equality between rich enlistment and poor enlistment to have
study
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from all perspectives.
For example
,the government of Canada established a law for
admission
to obtain an education without giving any payment.
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,
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need to spend their valuable time doing a job for earning money to pay
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higher-education
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.
Moreover
,
recruitment
get
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more time to study promptly unless they do part-time jobs.Giving
literacy
is not considered as the kindness of anyone but
also
it is a right to have for
recruitment
in all aspects since charging money for
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the scholarship
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scholarship
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is ridiculous. Since the culture provide is chargeless to all
admission
,the society and the country status will be changed.The free learning system will be raised many graduates and skilled professionals in future and
also
it will help
to
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the nation gain tremendous economic growth.
For instance
, the economic ratio is at a higher level in Canada after they implemented costless
literacy
rules in their country.In some places government already started the process to learn
scholar
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as
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free of cost and their
literacy
achieved a hundred per cent in terms of pass out ratio. In conclusion,education must be feasible for all students and avoid the discrimination system in between
admission
.The government must take proper actions on
this
issue and empower education equal to all.
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