Many people think that fast food companies should not be allowed to advertise while others believe that all companies should have the right to advertise. What is your opinion?
Fast
food
had Use synonyms
becoming
more and more popular in today’s lifestyle of eating. Many Change the form of the verb
become
people
may think that advisement should be banned from fast Use synonyms
food
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companies
to promote their Use synonyms
food
product whereas some do agree that it is all Use synonyms
companies
’ right to make their Use synonyms
advertisement
. In my personal opinion, I totally agree that all Use synonyms
companies
can have the Use synonyms
rights
to advertise their Fix the agreement mistake
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products
or services. Use synonyms
However
, rules and regulations should be implemented while allowing each Linking Words
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companies
to have their freedom in promoting respective Change to a singular noun
company
products
, in order to address the Use synonyms
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society
concerns, mainly on receiving wrong Replace the word
social
information
, especially targeting Use synonyms
children
.
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To begin
with, all Linking Words
companies
including fast Use synonyms
food
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companies
should have Use synonyms
their
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the
freedoms
to promote their Fix the agreement mistake
freedom
products
because all Use synonyms
companies
need sales to survive their businesses in Use synonyms
this
competitive era of Linking Words
economy
. Add an article
the economy
This
is not only applied to small Linking Words
companies
or minor businesses but Use synonyms
also
to big and Linking Words
well developed
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well-developed
companies
. Big fast Use synonyms
food
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company
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companies
such
as MC Donald’s and Kentucky’s always come out with interesting and eye-catching advertising whenever new items came up. Despite having enough popularity among other fast Linking Words
food
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companies
, they still come out with new items to boost Use synonyms
people
’s interest Use synonyms
toward
them. Change preposition
in
This
is because they still need to maintain their market and sales in order to pay salaries to a huge number of workers. Linking Words
However
, some Linking Words
people
may think that these Use synonyms
companies
should not advertise too much due to certain concerns.
It is undeniable that fast Use synonyms
food
gives Use synonyms
the
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apply
society
an unhealthy image which is a fact itself. Use synonyms
This
is probably the main reason some Linking Words
people
may find it uncomfortable when certain fast Use synonyms
food
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companies
advertise their Use synonyms
food
items too much. I would think that the most worried group of Use synonyms
people
is the parents because their main concern is if Use synonyms
children
get too attracted to the Use synonyms
fast
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fast-food
food
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advertisement
, they may become addicted and it will become a problem to their health, Use synonyms
such
as obesity. Linking Words
Therefore
, Linking Words
although
fast Linking Words
food
Use synonyms
companies
can have the freedom to promote their Use synonyms
products
as other Use synonyms
companies
do, rules and Use synonyms
regulation
should be implemented to ensure that no misleading Fix the agreement mistake
regulations
information
is projected through their Use synonyms
advertisement
. Fast Use synonyms
food
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companies
should be very cautious with the Use synonyms
information
presented via their Use synonyms
advertisement
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,
because it can directly impact Remove the comma
apply
on
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apply
to
our Change preposition
apply
society
. Use synonyms
For instance
, if Linking Words
children
nowadays Use synonyms
becoming
more and more addicted to fast Wrong verb form
become
food
, obesity in Use synonyms
children
will become a new healthcare burden.
In conclusion, no Use synonyms
companies
should be banned from advertising Use synonyms
own
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their own
products
or services because it is their Use synonyms
rights
. Fix the agreement mistake
right
Nevertheless
, all Linking Words
companies
should hold their social responsibility by following rules and Use synonyms
regulation
while creating Fix the agreement mistake
regulations
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the advertisement
an advertisement
advertisement
to ensure no wrong Fix the agreement mistake
advertisements
information
is passed on to Use synonyms
the
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apply
society
and Use synonyms
people
.Use synonyms
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