Aircrafts have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or are out of season. Some people consider it a good trend, but some people oppose it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The graph reveals the number of bananas which sold in Japanese
France
Germany
and the
USA
from 1996 to 2004. Overall, in 1996
Japan
and
France
sold the same total of bananas and
Germany
and the
USA
sold less than them. At the end of
this
period,
Japan
and
France
had the same sales while
Germany
sold just under them and the
USA
had the lowest sale. In 1996
Japan
and
France
sold about 2
kg
.
However
, the number of bananas in
Japan
rose reached to 3
kg
as a peak in 1998 while
France
was remained stable until the same year. Both of these countries had a rapid fall in 1999. After
this
year there they fluctuated until 2003 which they became different minimally. While
Japan
had a rapid decline to 1.5
kg
France
levelled out at 2
kg
to 2004.
Also
,
Japan
's sales increase to 2
kg
in the same year. At the beginning of
this
period,
Germany
sold approximately 1.5
kg
while the
USA
sold just under it in around 1
kg
. In comparison to
Germany
which had picked a high of just over than 2.5
kg
the
USA
, it's a had no change trend until 1998. After that
Germany
dipped a low of well over than one
kg
while the
USA
sold almost as much as past. In the other years of
this
period, both of them had a stable trend until the end which the
USA
sold a little more than one
kg
and
Germany
had around 1
kg
banana's sales.
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