an essay presenting the pros and cons of teens using social media

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How does social media influence teens? Either the influence is beneficial, or detrimental to the young. As technology develops so do
people
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mentally. Social media is distinguished fulfilment for our society but
also
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reversal
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. At the
outset
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SM gave
people
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opportunity
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opportunities
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for connections with family, friends and new encounters.
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, sharing photos and moods can easily update everyone
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one’s
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doing and what thoughts they have. It is important to keep those bonds with
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when there is separation from one another.
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, nowadays SM gives chance to young artsy and ambitious
people
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to show more openly their talent, potential and get profit from what they are doing through sponsorship. From the opposite
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there is darkness in
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cycle of opportunities and sharing
one’s
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personal life in the net.
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, one can always find unacceptable, unwelcomed comments directed to them.
People
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will always try to make up for
one’s
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complexes and bring others down.
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uncontrollable and immature
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can effortlessly shatter
one’s
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mental health. To sum up, Social media can give
people
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extremely beneficial functions but one
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to be careful what they share and be ready for criticism because it is always there.
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