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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers/books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.

#future #nobody #newspapers #books
Newspapers
 and
books
 have been the source of
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entertainment and news for people for a few centuries.
However
, according to forecasts, printed versions of them will be replaced by online ones because it is cheaper. I fully agree with
this
 statement not that much because of the price, but because online publishers do not use paper, and
also
 most of the
books
 and
newspapers
 can be found and downloaded from the Internet easily. To start with, the production of
books
 or
newspapers
 demands tons of wood and water, which leads to
the
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deforestation, and as a consequence to the extinction of species.
For example
, most
of
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Russian
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 paper factories locates in the middle of Siberia, which is full of forests and wide rivers. And by reports of Green Peace, the wooden area of
taiga
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 has been decreased
in
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one and a half times since 1900, as well as
the
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most of
rivers
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 have become shallow. One of the main
reason
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of
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such
situation
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 is cutting
forest
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forests
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 and
usage
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 of water for the production of different types of paper.
Moreover
, users can easily find any issue of a newspaper or even a rare book online. The Internet is full of sites, where you can download comics, novels or publications of any author free, without any payment.
For instance
, a few weeks ago I had to do a small project for my university, and I was in need
for
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data from an old newspaper, dated back to 1998. Its publisher house had an electronic archive, where I found everything needed.
Besides
, I have been downloading
books
instead
 of buying them since I was a teenager, and I had no problems
in
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finding any. In conclusion, online versions will replace printed
newspapers
 and
books
 in the future, because people all around the world care about
an
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 environment and choose less harmful ways to read.
Furthermore
, there is an electronic edition of almost any novel, so a person does not have to buy them anymore.
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  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – Problems
  • Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
  • Conclusion

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