As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

In the digitalization, technological development has become more and more sophisticated.

Hence

,

computers

are approached by individuals in education without the teacher’s assistance. From my perspective, I totally disagree with

this

point. First of all, it is obvious that

computers

are devices and always depend on utilizers. Because users will control their requirements after operating

computers

,

in addition

, students can struggle with

computers

when they need help, depending on

computers

. In recent days, Vietnamese student

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to learn mathematics, and

while

they do homework at home they usually use

computers

to address these challenging assignments, leading to their laziness in thinking by themselves, losing the way to stimulate thought-provoking and critical thinking skills. Turning to the next point, it is undeniable that

computers

bring about a solid knowledge database that has the responsibility

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storing the majority of important information. In

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light of

this

benefit,

instead

of utilizing notebooks, university students would rather use

computers

to take notes much more than others. There are some works that the teacher is willing to do except

computers

are empathizing with students. One of the reasons that teachers not only spread their motivation but

also

they always take care of these genes as much as possible.

In contrast

, objects without emotions, like

computers

only give the student the knowledge they want regardless of their feelings, resulting lack of observation. In conclusion,

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extremely disagree with

this

point.

although

computers

bring many benefits, they will not be competitive with teachers or even

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.