You should write a story ending with the words “It was only then that I realised they had mistaken me for someone else.”

I was a 12 years old kid with some friends, but most of the time I have been feeling lonely. There was nobody that I could share with except my family, but you know that sometimes you can’t tell everything to your mum or dad. When I started to write my

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about the

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that had happened during the day. I started to feel more calm and free.

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book was hidden from everyone without exceptions. There were all of my experiences from cheerful to miserable moments.Everything was

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. I am taking notes, talking with my parents and everything is perfect. Well until one amazing sunny

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in which I couldn’t find it in the place I used to hide it. After five days of wondering where it could be my little

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, the oldest of my sisters Jessica shows it with the

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in her hand. I was frightened and couldn’t move more than a

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. But somehow I found the force to ask her what is

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doing in her hands. I couldn’t imagine what she had read in it, because there were

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that nobody knew about. She moved closer to me and started to ask me why I hadn’t told her anything about my talent in writing stories. I told

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she would be very ungrateful about the

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I had written down about

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because there were

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for her too. No matter If I am happy or sad, I always open the

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and put down everything that has happened . She told me that my writings were like a movie script. “You should give them to dad’s friend who is in the theatre”-she said but I didn’t believe it. She

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back my

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and I run into my room to hide it again. One day someone unknown had called me three times. I wondered who

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could be and I called back. When I answered they started to talk to me about some movie from which I will be writing the script.

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I realise that

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is all Jessica's fault”. I decided to go and see what

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guy was talking about. When I went, somebody grabbed me and seduced me

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the changing room. The girl

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me clothes to put on and started to put on makeup on me. When I got out of

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room everyone was looking at me. I felt embarrassed, but cool

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. They gave me a script and told me to say these words. It was only

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that I realised they had mistaken me for someone else.