Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that It Is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Perspective
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Perspectives
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of the idea to accept bad
situation
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situations
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are varied
betwwen
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between
people
. Some
people
believe that it is best to accept unsatisfactory jobs or shortage of money, while others argue that it is better to try to improve
you
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future
. Some
people
choose to accept their bad situations because they believe it is their fate and they feel it is the best way for them, and they must go with the flow.
For example
, a man who got accepted to a
job
in a position that he did not dream about and did not like,
also
he knew he can do better in another
job
,
however
, he choose to remain in
this
job
and to accept his
situation
and not to try to improve his
future
.
Also
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,Also
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some
people
are afraid
from
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new experiences, so they will accept their bad
job
or
bad
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a bad
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life.
Besides
that, some
people
believe it is better to try and improve
such
situations. I believe the reason they act that way is because
that
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they
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have big dreams and the
situation
they have is not enough for them,
also
they are so
ambition
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about their
future
.
For instance
, some
people
dream to have a great career, others like to be rich
people
and
to
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not worry about money. In conclusion, I believe that we can accept a bad
situation
for a short time and
to
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not give up, we always have to try and
to
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do our best for a better life and a better
future
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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