Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both this attitudes and give your own opinion.

There is no doubt that
people
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divided into 2 groups: those who love adventures and home-based
people
. Those in
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group keep a view of “the action is life”, and
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the way of thinking of their opponents. In
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I will look
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sides of
this
attitude and give my opinion. On the one hand, it is clear that habitual things in life are most safe, as you know the pros and cons of it.
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of purchasing the same groceries each weekend, from the same producer, because the trust on it gain its reputation. It is
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,
people
afraid of being disappointed, or paying twice for
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purchase.
By contrast
, a growing number of
people
disagree and hold the view that
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life is multifaceted, where the meaning itself is to try something new, no matter new hobby or fresh style for cooking
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on
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Thanksgiving
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For instance
, according to British scientists,
people
who
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around the world are happier than
people
who never went out of its borders.
Consequently
, exploring something new changes not
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of
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, but
also
the way of thinking. All things considered, while
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of getting
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experience
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obvious to one sort of
people
, some still feel that being safe is much important. Overall, it seems advisable that since the
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exploring
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new things, and trials advancing
day
by
day
, meaning that a person becoming more and more intellectual, so I am in the bunch of adventure nation.
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Novelty
  • Routine
  • Comfort zone
  • Risk-taker
  • Risk-averse
  • Enrichment
  • Personal growth
  • Innovation
  • Creativity
  • Stability
  • Tradition
  • Habit
  • Familiarity
  • Personal enrichment
  • Life stages
  • Fulfilling
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