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Nowadays people are having more fast food. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

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In
this
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 day and age, the tendency to have more fast
food
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 is increasing, which is
in contrast
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 to the past. Even though fast
food
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 could be
time
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-saving, it can have a detrimental effect on health. In my opinion, the disadvantages of consuming fast
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 outweigh its advantages. The main advantage of having fast
food
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 is that it can save
time
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. The fast pace of
life
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 in the modern age has compelled people all over the world to have a hectic
life
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 which means that they are always in rush to get to
work
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 on
time
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, and most of them
work
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 overtime to make the ends meet, which gives them less
time
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 to make
food
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 themselves at home,
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 the tendency to consume more fast
food
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 has increased.
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, my cousin, who lives alone in the most expensive city in Iran, Tehran, usually does not have enough
time
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 to cook because she has to go to
work
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 early,
work
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 overtime and get stuck in the bumper-to-bumper traffic commuting to and fro
work
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;
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 most of the
time
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 she has no
time
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 and energy to prepare
food
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. All in all, the
time
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-saving nature of fast foods makes them a viable option in today’s hectic
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. That said, the main disadvantage of fast
food
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, which has to be considered by everyone who consumes them, is its harmful effect on the body. Fast foods are fried which means that they are oily,
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 they can cause cardiovascular disorders, high blood cholesterol, obesity and hypertension.
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, I have a friend who has been taking in more fast
food
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 when she is nervous and as she was living in Iran, she is anxious most of the
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, so she ends up consuming a great deal of fast
food
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;
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, she has a high level of cholesterol which had compelled her to be on a serious diet for the rest of her
life
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. All things considered, people are eating more fast
food
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 than ever and though fast
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 is
time
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-saving, it can lead to many serious disorders. All in all, I believe that the disadvantages of consuming fast
food
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 by far outpace its advantages.
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