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Experts claim that if older people do more exercise they will be healthier and happier. However, many elderly people suffer from a lack of fitness. What are the causes of this and what are some possible solutions?

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Experts believe that older
people
 will be healthier and happier if they do more workouts.
Nevertheless
, many older
people
 have a problem that they do not have enough
exercise
. In
this
 essay, the cause of
this
 problem and some possible solutions will be examined. It is undeniable that each older
people
 have a different medical condition, and
this
 condition is the main factor that impacts their
exercise
. Some of them may have problems with
thier
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their
 backs or legs which are necessary for supporting them to
workout
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. When their body did not work well like younger
people
, it would be harmful
for
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 them because they will get pain easily. Another factor is that not all types of sport are suitable for elder
people
. If they try to
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work out
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workout
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 alone without any expert or any personal trainer, they will do some postures that hurt themselves.
Nevertheless
, there are two possible solutions to protect them
surffering
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suffering
 from a lack of fitness.
Firstly
, the government should provide a policy for encouraging elderly
people
 getting
exercise
 correctly.
This
 could be done by organizing
sport
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 clubs for elderly
people
. Another possible solution is educating societies to learn what elderly
people
 can do for
exercise
. Particularly, limitations of
workout
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workouts
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 for elderly
people
 who have different medical conditions. In conclusion, it is true that getting enough
exercise
 will bring happiness and healthy life for older
people
. Due to different circumstances
such
 as medical
condition
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conditions
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, many older
people
 still have issues of lacking
exercise
.
Nonetheless
, it could be solved by government policy to promote fitness and education about appropriate workouts for elderly
people
.
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