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Some people believe that face to face communication is always more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion and include relevant examples.

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Communication delivered in person has always been believed to be more effective than the written form. From my perspective, personal offline conversing is the most powerful platform since it can send not only about the content but other unconscious messages through body language and the atmosphere. Communication should not only be talking and the content of the
conversation
, but it
also
 should be about other elements happening during the talk takes place. Researches recently have pointed out that the weather, the ambience, the aroma and the temperature play as much as 66% of an effective
conversation
.
This
 can be clarified by the example that when talking in cosy places, the message is likely to deliver better and the final goal is
also
 set to more success rate. As high as 70% of people answered an online recently survey carried out by USSH university
also
 committed that on hot days or pouring rainy days, their
conversation
, especially in dealing or pitching, is often not well achieved. Regarding body language,
this
 has been one of the flourishing courses of study in the
last
 decade. People actually say more than just the talk content in certain settings, and how they are behaving during events. If they are sweating when talking, there would be a higher chance that they are nervous and telling lies. If they are front in the
conversation
, they often lean toward and look in the eyes of their partners. All the aforementioned factors contribute to a true
conversation
 that only face-to-face meetings can provide. With all clear consideration and study, these factors are unprovided in terms of written communication. In sum,
although
 in
this
 day and age, online
conversation
 or written one has been more popular thanks to the advanced technology. In-person communications, from my point of view, are still the most powerful method of talking and conversing.
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