Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.

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Some
people
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think that there are fewer
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in the world
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that will
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make
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easier and some
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die out every year is not crucial. From my point of view, I totally disagree with
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opinion. On the one hand, having fewer
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in the world could make
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’s
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life
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easier for some
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.
First
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of all,
people
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can communicate easier when they travel or work
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abroad
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.
As a result
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, everyone could understand each other quickly.
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, every
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often tends to exchange their goods and cooperate together,
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most
people
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still have to study some more
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to communicate that may take a lot of time and money to do.
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, if there are fewer
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in the world, learners only need to focus on one or two
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.
On the other hand
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, it is extremely vital to preserve the original
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in each
country
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. The
first
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reason is that
language
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might be the unique feature of each
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,
thus
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,
people
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from another nation could know them through their
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.
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, each
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has
their
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its
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own beauty according to
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its
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culture and
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lifestyle
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life style
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which only
people
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in
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country
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can understand and use.
Secondly
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,
language
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could be related to the victory in the past.
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, Vietnam
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been using Vietnamese for thousand
years
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although
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people
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in Vietnam were attacked and influenced by invaded countries.
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, each
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has their own beauty To sum up, while having fewer
languages
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might be easier for
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’s
life
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, it is
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particularly critical to have
the
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own
language
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in each nation.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Language extinction
  • Communication barrier
  • Linguistic imperialism
  • Endangered languages
  • Language revitalization
  • Monolingual
  • Multilingual
  • Language preservation
  • Homogenization
  • Language policy
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Intangible heritage
  • Indigenous languages
  • Globalization
  • Dialects
  • Localization
  • Language documentation
  • Digital archiving
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