Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.

Some
people
think that there are fewer
languages
in the world
will
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make
life
easier and some
languages
die out every year is not crucial. From my point of view, I totally disagree with
this
opinion. On the one hand, having fewer
languages
in the world could make
people
’s
life
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easier for some
reasons
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.
First
of all,
people
can communicate easier when they travel or work
aboard
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.
As a result
, everyone could understand each other quickly.
Secondly
, every
country
often tends to exchange their goods and cooperate together,
thus
most
people
still have to study some more
languages
to communicate that may take a lot of time and money to do.
Therefore
, if there are fewer
languages
in the world, learners only need to focus on one or two
languages
.
On the other hand
, it is extremely vital to preserve the original
language
in each
country
. The
first
reason is that
language
might be the unique feature of each
country
,
thus
,
people
from another nation could know them through their
language
.
In addition
, each
language
has
their
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own beauty according to
their
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culture and
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life style
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which only
people
in
this
country
can understand and use.
Secondly
,
language
could be related to the victory in the past.
For example
, Vietnam
have
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been using Vietnamese for thousand
years
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although
people
in Vietnam were attacked and influenced by invaded countries.
Finally
, each
language
has their own beauty To sum up, while having fewer
languages
might be easier for
people
’s
life
, it is
also
particularly critical to have
the
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own
language
in each nation.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Language extinction
  • Communication barrier
  • Linguistic imperialism
  • Endangered languages
  • Language revitalization
  • Monolingual
  • Multilingual
  • Language preservation
  • Homogenization
  • Language policy
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Intangible heritage
  • Indigenous languages
  • Globalization
  • Dialects
  • Localization
  • Language documentation
  • Digital archiving
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