Governments give a lot of support to artists, even though some people think it is a waste of money that could have been used elsewhere. Discuss both vioews and give your opinion.

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earns money through the taxes paid by the individuals on their income and
then
spends it through various projects
such
as building roads for better transportation, hospitals for healthcare, sports facilities for the athletes and so on. But any amount
that is
spent on
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entertainment or
art
often comes under heavy
critisism
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criticism
as many people think that it is not a necessity
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when compared to schools or hospitals. There are obviously two schools of thought that differ from each other on
this
point. According to me,
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invested by the authorities
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helping the artists
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is definitely not a waste. Like any other basic human need, having some enjoyment and fun is
also
important. And
that is
provided by the performers in various forms.
For example
, some people find it interesting to watch a movie or a real play. For a few, visiting an
art
exhibition or photography studio is peaceful. Many of them,
also
enjoy attending a live music
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. Now imagine, local bodies only spend on developing healthcare and education, as they are more important, would
this
all be possible? The answer is a clear cut No. On the flip side, there are advocates who support less or no spending on
art
, culture and other social activities. According to them, we need to list down our priorities and invest heavily
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something
that is
going to give better returns in
monetory
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monetary
terms
such
as big infrastructure plans or anything
that is
of primary need
such
as creating a foundation or developing the base where the society is sure of its survival
first
. Entertainment can come letter.
However
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body, it is
utmost
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to strike
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right balance between the amount of expenditure on various projects. It is surely not advisable, to give more importance to a few categories and ignore the others. There are people, who solely depend on
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art
and entertainment as a medium of earning.
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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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  • In conclusion
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