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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world.Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Disy both these views and give your own opinion.

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In today's
world
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 some people have an opinion that it is absolutely helpful to portion information as much as possible, but
on the other hand
, others believe that some data is totally confidential or extremely valuable to be shared freely.From my point of view, both approaches have their advantages and disadvantages.So,in the following
essay
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 I will discuss both viewpoints.
To begin
 with,
the
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 numerous number of men and women believe that sharing knowledge is momentous because it helps to keep us updated.To cue evidence, think about our pre_internet lives, some folks who are scientists or researchers could not share his or her science with the
world
 and every individual did not aware of development or invention around the
world
.So,in my opinion, sharing
such
 useful details about everything helps us to be up to date with technology and it
also
 makes us professional.
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contrary
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,others maintain that we should not
access
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 to
huge
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a huge
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 amount of information.
For instance
, research relate to weapons and nuclear science is definitely private, because if it is fallen into wrong hands it can lead to terrorist activities.So,it is much better to keep
these kind
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 of discoveries secret. To draw a conclusion,my opinion is
neutral
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 one.It is obviously significant for the
world
 to share knowledge and wisdom but it is equally crucial to safeguard the information which is sensitive.But
apparently
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 people will be more educated and occupational in the near future.
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