Because of the global economy, many goods including what we use as daily basics produced by other countries have to be transported for a long distance. To what extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
The markets worldwide have come closer and
as a result
, the product
with a
high demand in one Remove the article
apply
country
may be required to be produced in some other countries. This
arrangement will often have logistical hurdles. We will see if transporting goods of everyday use from long distance is beneficial or does it have its share of problems.
Any product
will have to be transported from other
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another country
other countries
country
only if the domestic manufacturers are unable to fulfill
the expectations of the buyers or the Change the spelling
fulfil
product
is not at all available in domestic
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the domestic
country
. For example
, there is huge
demand for kiwis in India as the fruit is often marketed as the healthier option to domestic because of its nutritional properties. Since Kiwis are mostly produced in New Add an article
a huge
zealand
, bringing them to India will be Change the capitalization
Zealand
quite
time consuming considering the distance that makes both the countries apart. Fruits being perishable in nature, tend to Change the article
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be deteriorate
in quality quickly Change the verb form
deteriorate
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than
that
other products. Correct your spelling
than
As a result
of this
, the ideal nutrients that are supposed to benefit the consumer may actually be lost in transit. Also
, because of this
artificially created demand, local manufacturers will be left with unsold stock, which will also
move down in quality.
On the other hand
, non perishable
items, Add a hyphen
non-perishable
such
as Correct your spelling
toothbrushes
tooth brushes
, Correct your spelling
toothbrushes
tooth pastes
, branded formal clothes, gadgets Correct your spelling
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such
as mobiles, produced in other destinations provide buyers with a lot of variety to choose from. It brings in perfect competition and guaranteed quality items. One can consider an example of German cars being manufactured in Germany and being assembled in India as a final product
. It gives an Indian car manufacturer, a run for their money if the German car is able to make heads turn purely because of its design and performance.
To conclude, I can say that, the advantages of
the disadvantages of a Change preposition
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product
manufactured outside the home country
, will depend on the nature of product
. It can be said with some Add an article
the product
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of comfort that, the number of positives will outnumber its negatives.Correct your spelling
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite