You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking frined. In your letter -explain why you have moved -describe the new house -invite your friend to come and visit

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Hi John, How are you doing? Do you know I just moved to a new

house

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last

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week? That explains the reason why you haven'

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heard from me in a while. To be honest, I wouldn'

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have moved from my former

house

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however

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, I couldn'

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put up with the constant leakage from the bathroom tap. I have complained a lot about these issues to my landlord, but he hasn'

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been able to do anything about it.

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this

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new

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is quite lovely, it has a yellow gate that you can'

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miss when passing by the street.

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, it has a nice garden

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quite noticeable once you enter by the gate.

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, the

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has its own separate garage, and it's a four-bedroom apartment, all room ensuite.

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, why not come around one of these days? I will be free starting from Monday

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week, I would love to have you around for a visit, that way you will be able to see some other great stuff that I have around. Do let me know if you will be able to make it, I will be expecting you. Till I hear from you again, do have a great time. Best regards, Rotimi

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

204 words

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You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking frined. In your letter -explain why you have moved -describe the new house -invite your friend to come and visit

Nowadays there is an increase in social problems involving young people because more parents spent time at work than with their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree ith this view.

Some people say that the Internet is bringing people together by making the world smaller. Do you agree that the Internet is making it easier for people to communicate with one another?

Some children spend hours everyday on their smartphones. Why is i some children spent hourt the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development.

Some people think that space exploration can benefit humans in many aspects. Others think that it has many drawbacks. Discuss both views and give your opinion.