In some countries, even though employees who spend
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at a job than normal, can bring economic
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, It could lead to social with negative results. I strongly agree with
point of view, as
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believe that
must have better work and
balance, while they should spend some
for
enjoyment.
of all,
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workingCorrect article usage
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age group must create balance for their career and living as they always struggle with work pressure. Having appropriate job
can bring many benefits rather than high economic achievement
as
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health situation, and strong family engagement. Japanese
,
,
they Correct pronoun usage
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are always working for more than 12
per day which could lead them
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fatigue and other related mental depression. In 2015, it accounted for over 1 million
diagnosed with
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levelFix the agreement mistake
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of mental
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and
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most of them have no kid or even doublet.
,
it appears that longer working
can follow wealth and fortune to
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society, employers must provide a good working environment
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is suitable for working
theirChange preposition
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own pace.
, spending
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amusements that they enjoy give
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chance to live in present.
is because relaxation and satisfaction are
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of
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to feel that we can breathe and move
as a hobby or free activities. Without those leisure
which allows us to think freshly,
,
tend to feel stuck in tasks right behind their job desk or just snuggling sofa with deep tiredness after long working
. While there is no question about
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of high financial achievements, it is clear that we,
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, should sell our times for some
happiness to possibly feel
.
In conclusion, It is illogical to say not to work long
to get succeed in finance, to suggest that organizing
properly for both
and career,
for some
comfort. I recommend that not
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pursue economic success without low
quality and consume
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for yourself.