In some countries, even though employees who spend
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hours
at a job than normal, can bring economic
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, It could lead to social with negative results. I strongly agree with
this
point of view, as
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believe that
people
must have better work and
life
balance, while they should spend some
time
for
life
enjoyment.
First
of all,
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workingCorrect article usage
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age group must create balance for their career and living as they always struggle with work pressure. Having appropriate job
hours
can bring many benefits rather than high economic achievement
such
as
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health situation, and strong family engagement. Japanese
people
,
for example
,
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are always working for more than 12
hours
per day which could lead them
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fatigue and other related mental depression. In 2015, it accounted for over 1 million
people
diagnosed with
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of mental
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and
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most of them have no kid or even doublet.
Therefore
,
although
it appears that longer working
hours
can follow wealth and fortune to
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society, employers must provide a good working environment
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is suitable for working
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own pace.
Furthermore
, spending
time
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amusements that they enjoy give
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chance to live in present.
This
is because relaxation and satisfaction are
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of
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to feel that we can breathe and move
such
as a hobby or free activities. Without those leisure
time
which allows us to think freshly,
for example
,
people
tend to feel stuck in tasks right behind their job desk or just snuggling sofa with deep tiredness after long working
hours
. While there is no question about
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of high financial achievements, it is clear that we,
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, should sell our times for some
life
happiness to possibly feel
life
.
In conclusion, It is illogical to say not to work long
hours
to get succeed in finance, to suggest that organizing
time
properly for both
life
and career,
also
for some
life
comfort. I recommend that not
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pursue economic success without low
life
quality and consume
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time
for yourself.