Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you argree or disagree?

It is believed that the more developed our world is, the more options for us to choose from. From my point of view, I firmly agree with
this
statement because of the following reasons that I am going to
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discuss
elaborately in
this
essay. The
first
argument given to support my opinion
that is
people
nowadays, especially students, have a wide variety of choices in terms of education to choose from. Unlike in the past, students had
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in their choices of major or university, pupils in the modern society now have a wide range of new majors and various types of universities
such
as international universities or community
colleages
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colleges
colleagues
that can suitable with their abilities.
As a result
, a number of qualified
people
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the
next
labour market which can lead to the growth of our country.
Secondly
, thanks to the flourish of technology, there are more and more state-of-art inventions are created to meet
people
's
demand
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.
For example
, there are now numerous possible ways for us to communicate even from a far distance. Some decades ago, the only way for
people
to communicate is they have to meet and talk face to face with others, but now modern means of communication make our life much more convenient.
People
can have conversations by making phone calls, video calls or texting their friends and families easily with their
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smartphones
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smart phones
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. In conclusion, with all the reasons that I mentioned
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above
, I strongly believe that we are having
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many choices in every part of our life which is extremely beneficial and help
people
have a better life quality.
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