Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Living a healthy and sugar-free lifestyle is of the utmost importance in the fast-paced and hectic daily routines of the twenty-first century. Some suggest that a rise in prices would tackle high consumption levels of hazardous sweetened food items. I wholeheartedly agree and recommend a

government

tax on these goods not only to dissuade people from approaching them but

also

to provide authorities with additional financial resources for a broader awareness campaign. On the one hand, the increase in the cost of sugary products will definitely lead to

less purchase

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if the rise is sufficiently substantial.

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, the considerable tax imposed on

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cigarettes brought about

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reduction in sales previously.

Therefore

, a significant spike in the price tag of food and beverages containing life-threatening levels of sugar certainly results in fewer consumers potentially leading to a more healthy society.

Furthermore

,

this

trend has the necessary requirements to bring about a reduction in obesity and of course lower levels of pressure on the healthcare system.

On the other hand

, a surge in the authorities' revenue paves the way for them to initiate an expanded public opinion campaign. Considering the enormous impact of advertising on the awareness of the public,

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can utilise the taxes earned to introduce intensive healthy and sugar-free commercials and programs involving respected national and international figures,

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. Regarding

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advice, if

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secures more funds it can promote dietary consciousness which can lead to even lower amounts of detrimental products

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sweets

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consumed. In conclusion, sugary food and beverage items have tremendously devastating long-term impacts on the health of

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society. I unequivocally endorse soaring the expense of these malicious products not only to discourage people from buying them but

also

to arm the

government

with even more pecuniary resources to promote a healthy societal lifestyle generally.