Recent figures show an increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18. Some psychologists claim that the basic reason for this is that children these days are not getting the social and emotional learning they need from parents and teachers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays,

a

Correct article usage

the

show examples

number of

crime

Replace the word

criminal

show examples

records of teenagers who age under 18 years old rise. Some psychologists believe that the main reason for

this

is

lack

Correct article usage

the lack

show examples

of attention from their

parents

and

teachers

who have to teach

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

social and emotional learning.

For

Change preposition

From

show examples

my perspective, I totally agree with

this

statement. In the following paragraphs, I will give reasons to support my opinion.

First

of all, both families and

teachers

play a vital role

for

Change preposition

in

show examples

teaching

children

to live with others. By getting enough care and love from these people will create a positive impact on

children

emotion

Fix the agreement mistake

emotions

show examples

. It will make them

feeling

Change the form of the verb

feel

show examples

warm. Having a strong bond among families and

teachers

could reduce and prevent any violent cases.

For instance

, there are several cases that

children

would like to get attention from their

parents

by committing a

crime

.

That is

because they think it would be the only way to get attention from their

parents

.

Nevertheless

, some people might argue that an increasing

crime

rate among

teenager

Fix the agreement mistake

teenagers

show examples

may be the result of other external factors

such

as

crime

TV shows. In fact,

this

could not affect

children

if

parents

are closely take

Change the verb form

are closely taking

are closely taken

show examples

care of their

children

.

Moreover

, some researchers

reveals

Change the verb form

reveal

show examples

that youngers are seeking to love. They want to be both givers and receivers. Particularly, the love from their families will encourage them to do good things.

For example

, there are a lot of young gangsters who commit crimes.

However

, when their

parents

asked

Wrong verb form

ask

show examples

them to stop, they will stop immediately. In conclusion, it is true that

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

social and emotional learning should be taught by

parents

and

teachers

in order to reduce the number of crimes among youngsters.