Proper function of prison is to punish criminals and life in prison should be hard. Do you agree or disagree?

The adequate work of prison is to give a hard

life

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to the criminal and should punish the

perpetator

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perpetrator

perpetrators

.

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essay agrees with the statement as it restricts the offender to commit

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crimes and

also

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gives

justice

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to the victim.

Criminal

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sent to

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jail should be

be

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treated hard enough to have the frightening impact of

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life

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in prison in future restricting them to redo the crime. To say

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, suitable punishment should be given to an individual according to the crime he has done to make him realise

of

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his

offense

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offence

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and how it can ruin his

life

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.

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, making

criminals

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to

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be aware of their illegal

action

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actions

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and

it's

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impacts on their lives.

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,

recent

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survey done in 2019 of Indian

prsions

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prisons

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reveals that 43% of the people are one time criminal and has stoped it after having

hard

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time behind the bar.

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, giving tough

time

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to the prisoners makes the sufferer feel heard by the

goverment

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government

. To say that, people who are victims

thinks

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of getting

justice

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to them and if the legislations make strict rules for the

criminals

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and their lives in jails are made real tough that gives the

suferer

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sufferer

breath of relief

asin

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in

terms of

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to her.

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, enables people to rely on the actions taken by

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government

goverenment

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instead

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of hitting back to the

criminals

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making the victim

as

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another criminal.

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, Rapists in

Damini

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the Damini

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rape case got the hanging punishment by the Indian

govermnet

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government

giving

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to Damini's family and

a

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hope to other victims to get

justice

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. In conclusion, making

life

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in prison hard with suitable

punishements

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punishments

punishment

encourages the

criminals

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to stop

commiting

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committing

crimes

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and it

also

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support

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victims in getting

justice

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.