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Shopping habits depend more on your age group than anything else. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#habits #age #group
The idea
that
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is that
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 the way
people
shopping
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shop
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 depends more on
age
 demographics than any other factor. Despite the possible drawbacks, I believe that
age
 is relevant in terms of a person's tastes,
however
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 income is a greater determiner.
People
 who believe that
age
 group is the main cause affecting shopping habits have valid reasons for saying so.
To begin
 with, they always give priority to non-digital items or less common daily devices.
On the other hand
, technology now has become a habitual thing to the young and it is influencing modern shopping habits. Indeed,
people
 who advocate
age
 brackets have a point, but for
me
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 there are various aspects that have an impact on shopping habits, especially income.
For instance
, the
first
-class ones and most of their items are luxurious.
Conversely
, unwealthy
people
 can not afford to shop frequently because of financial
concern
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. Having explored the different sides of the argument, the way
people
 shop apart from different generations,financial flexibility is the clearest factor influencing consumer
behaviors
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • preferences
  • financial capacities
  • technological savviness
  • online platforms
  • traditional in-store shopping
  • marketing and advertising
  • susceptible to trends
  • generational values
  • environmental awareness
  • sustainable and ethical shopping
  • value for money
  • product longevity
  • cultural background
  • income levels
  • personal interests
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