Your car is hired from a company and while you are driving on holiday, you have a small accident. Your will have to write a letter to the company to explain it. You need to explain the following: -when and where you hired it -describe how the accident happened -And what kind of action you took after the accident.

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Dear Sir, I am writing to you to inform you about the incident, which happened

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Friday while I was driving one of your autos. I rented my motor from your Bishop Stortford Branch of yours on the 15th of June at 12pm. After fulfilling the relevant paperwork and deposit, I started my journey towards Wakefield from your office at 12.15pm, which was scheduled earlier. About the incident, I was driving over 100 miles an hour on a comparatively busy road, and the rain was getting heavier, which caused the road

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and suddenly I lost balance of the rented motor near M15. Fortunately, the windscreen was only smashed, which cut my right arm.

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, I decided to cancel my journey and called my office, car hire company, and insurance company

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. My insurance company will repair the windscreen damage of the motor, and I am still waiting for the penalty from you. I am awaiting your response. Yours faithfully, Ryan Smith

toriqul1976Wed Nov 24 2021

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

162 words

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