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some people think that government should provide assistance to all kind of artists including painter musician and poets etc. however other people think that it is a waste of money discuss both view and give your opinion.

#people #government #assistance #artists #painter #musician #poets #waste #money
Art
 has always been the spirit of each culture and the
artists
 are the ones who create
this
 spirit. There are some opposing ideas around providing some
assisstance
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assistance
 to all kinds of
artists
. Some
people
 believe that
artists
 must be helped by the authority and
the
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others consider
this
 action as a waste of
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 budget. I believe that the government should value the
artists
 and their efforts by supporting them mentally and financially. Some
people
 believe that the
artists
 must be supported as they can give a characteristic to a society. A poem can show the history and the culture of a community, A painting and
the
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other types of visual
art
 like photographs can attract more tourists and expand the tourism industry. A lot of countries can find a reputation only by a piece of
art
. Louvre
musuem
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museum
, as an instance,
attract
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 millions of tourists which can be a great aid to support the tourism industry. Not all
the
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people
 care about
art
 and
plargarism
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plagiarism
 and lack of
copy
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copyright
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right
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 are common crimes in different societies which can truly hurt each artist mentally and financially. It is the governments' responsibility to control and prevent these crimes from happening and provide
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thorough support for all
artists
. Some
people
 do not consider
art
 as an essential element in society and believe that public money should be spent on other activities
such
 as scientific researches rather than
art
.
Although
 science, agriculture and the other fields are really important,
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art
 should be considered as important as them. As it helps
people
 to feel more relaxed and prevent depression. Not only does it give the spirit to the society, but
also
 it can increase the employment rate in each country. We should all be aware that not all
the
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people
 are interested in science or mathematics and there are
people
 who can perform really well in different
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 topics. In conclusion, I strongly believe that it is really crucial for each government to support the
artists
 in order to motivate them to nourish the culture and literature of the
socity
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society
.
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