Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In modern society, people become more concerned about the environment due to heavy damages from human activities in the
last
century.
However
, some people believe that the main environmental issue of our time is the loss of specific
species
of plants and animals while others argue that there are more important environmental problems to consider.
Consequently
, both sides will be discussed below. It is a fact that the loss of particular
species
of plants and animals are definitely critical to the ecosystem, and human activities as those
species
drive the natural cycle of food, reproduction, and evolution to each other.
In addition
, these losses mean that human experiments and researches may be prevented or never be discovered in the future
such
as medical cures.
However
, these extinctions of specific
species
may lead to benefit as well.
For instance
, the COVID-19 developed from the consumption of various wild animals like bats or rats. If some of those
species
disappear, the pandemic may not occur or may not be as fatal to death condition.
On the other hand
, other environmental issues are believed to be more concerned than the loss of some animal and plant
species
. Global climate
change
is one of those major issues. Climate
change
can cause ice melting in the north and south poles, which directly affects the sea level to rise.
This
can lead to the reduction of the land surface and may destroy most of the earth
species
in the long term. A similar event may appear in the ocean as the rise of sea level may significantly
change
the marine lives' behaviour and habitat due to the higher tide and the temperature
change
in the sea. These may result in
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destruction of several marine
species
. In conclusion, both views can lead to mass destruction of any
species
, and will obviously affect the human way of living from today onward.
Therefore
, in my opinion, the world organizations and all nations of the earth should begin a serious plan in solving those issues and cooperate in healing
this
planet together for as long as we stay in it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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