Some people are happy to stay in the same area for their whole life, while others prefer living in many different places. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, travelling is more
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compared to the past and people are
also
settling in many different regions.Some citizens want to stay in
same
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place
where they
born
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, but
other
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others
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prefer to move
many
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different locations.In
this
essay , I will discuss both views in the
follwing
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following
paragraphs and present my own opinion at the end. On the one hand , some people believe that staying in
same
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place
for a long time
have
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many benefits .There is no doubt that we do not need to leave our friends and relatives if we are staying in
same
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place
.
In addition
, we
also
do not need to learn new things like languages and customs .
However
, living in the same
place
cannot get
multi cultural
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experiences and knowledge.
For example
, if someone
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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