Some people believe prefer that to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?

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As the population increasing day by day rapidly in
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some folks think that to live in the home is better while others state opposite, like they are saying that there are numerous pros while living in an
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. As per view yes there's are more advantages of living in a
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while comparing to an
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. And will give reasons and
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provide relatable examples of why the
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is better.
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, taking about advantages of the
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is always start with that we can live comfortably without even living like a packed cubic because while we living in an
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we get more exhausted and we cannot even set outside our home.
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, if the family lives with grandparents
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we have to always think about themselves too, like what if anything happens with their health and they couldn't get upstairs and if in an emergy situation comes what will be a great choice.
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, if someone is living in a joint family
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the
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will be like comes as a great choice to stay together while in
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fast-moving world.
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, talking about other group living in an
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may have pros but there are not as many cons because if some lives in an
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they have to be live like they are always under observation because every single neighbour heard what you say.
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to
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point, if anything sudden things
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like a fire break and lift damage and many more in that situation we need to use the staircase and at that time even it will risk. To exemplify, a fire broke happened at surat in a class, while in that incident about 50 students died because there were studying in an
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which was situated about 10th floor. To sum up, As per my ,view a
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will always come
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rather than living in an
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because of the pros that a
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provides and while elaborating that someone will get more comfortable life without even distribution and
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it will come handy for our grandparents in case of an emergency.
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • customization options
  • renovate
  • structural changes
  • investments
  • appreciation/depreciation
  • maintenance costs
  • utility costs
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