There is a problem with the changing rooms in the sports center that you visit. You have complained several times but with no success. Write a letter to the manager of the sports center. In your letter: • Describe what the problem with the changing rooms is • Say what happened the last times you complained • Explain what you want the manager to do
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to you to express my dissatisfaction with the way the problem was handled by your staff. I reported the issue two times prior to
this
letter but it was not resolved. With this
letter, I hope that you take serious action to prevent it from happening again.
There are a total of five changing rooms for the ladies on the third
floor. Earlier last
month, I noticed that the door lock of two changing rooms: the innermost room and the second
last
room, was not working. As there are a lot of gym users especially during the peak period, having only three changing rooms with functioning locks is definitely not enough.
I reported this
problem to the counter staff last
month, on the same day I noticed it. She replied that she would fix this
problem. However
, only one was fixed. When I found out that the innermost door was still not fixed, I reported to another counter staff who was on duty on that day. I checked yesterday when I was at the gym again and, to my disappointment, it was still not fixed! I had to wait for almost twenty minutes for another available room.
I would appreciate it if you could get it fixed at the soonest time possible, please. I am pretty sure that other gym-goers face the same issue as me, and such
a long waiting time is really unacceptable. I look forward to receiving your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Norah ChenSubmitted by Wai on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite