Developed countries have created many environmental problems in the World, particularly in their contribution to global warming. Why is global warming a problem? What can be done to reduce the dangers of global warming?

over the past decades, climatic changes

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become a global problem. there is no doubt that

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devastating effects are from developed nations due to their higher number of industries. is there a disadvantage to

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change? what measures could be put in place to curb

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essay, these effects and their ways of solving them will be explored.

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, the most pressing

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environmental change is a rise in temperature. human activities

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fossil fuels like coal, oil and gas to generate electricity and power cars emit carbon dioxide in the atmosphere. excessive carbon dioxide emission hinders absorption of heat in the air,

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increasing temperature.

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, the average global temperature has increased by about 1.4

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Fahrenheit over the past 100 years.

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, it speeds glaciers melting leading to a rise in sea levels.

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could lead to flooding and

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of properties.

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there are solutions. to start with, individuals must be encouraged to use renewable energies. sources of energies

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as solar, winds and biomass could be used to generate light as compared to the use of coal and gas.

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, African countries could rely on energy from the sun to generate light. to add, the society must

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be educated to utilize public transport, other than their private cars.

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will help reduce CO2 emissions into the atmosphere.

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, the government must implement laws to protect our plants and people must be encouraged to plant more trees to aid in absorbing excessive CO2. To summarise, extreme climatic changes is a worldwide problem and it could

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in crises,

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individuals and the government have their roles to play in decreasing

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vexing issues.