Some people say that now is the best time in history to be living. What is your opinion about this? What other time in history would be interesting to live in?

Most
people
would agree that in
this
contemporary era we have absolute freedom to choose, especially as the world evolves so rapidly with advanced technologies. I feel that automatized machines make lives easier, and at the same
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people
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. My personal view will be provided in
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to live in the past. Admittedly, antecedent occasions give valuable lessons to present society, and by looking back
people
enjoys
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of having clear water every season and by one touch of
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tap.
For instance
,
people
till 2000 in Kazakhstan did not
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now
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anything about pampers
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and were using old methods, but now
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of
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mom is simplified day by day.
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, for most of the
people
present is
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the perfect
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time
for them, whereas
people
from
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would say that our decade was truly hard to live. In my personal view, today is better than yesterday, but
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is better than today.
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, fascinating
time
to live is now, because
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being has
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to use all privileges, we can read any books at any
time
, we can go toilet and take shower anytime, all children have
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to be educated. Centuries ago,
only
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wealthy
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population had
ability
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to read and write, be educated and have
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to go to schools. I am
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of modern civilization, and I cannot imagine a world without electricity, antibiotics and washing machines. It is logical to conclude that, our era is the best in comparison with the past, but
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would be brighter than now. Tremendous opportunities
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in the
future
, and
vast
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majority of
people
contributes
in
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it
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • unprecedented
  • prosperity
  • technological advancements
  • global connectivity
  • longevity
  • opportunities
  • self-expression
  • renaissance
  • exploration
  • industrial revolution
  • roaring twenties
  • unparalleled
  • groundbreaking
  • transformative
  • revolutionary
  • epoch-making
  • flourished
  • transcended
  • innovations
  • distinguished
  • renaissance artists
  • explorers
  • innovative entrepreneurs
  • exhilarating
  • era
  • unforgettable
  • boom
  • vibrant
  • exuberant
  • transformed
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