In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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, there is an increasing number of

people

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having health problems related to

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food

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. Some

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believe that the authorities should collect a higher tax

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these kinds of

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because it will help decrease the consumers demand

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fast-

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and

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encourage

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to cook

healthy

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meal

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at

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.

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of all, taxing higher on

junk

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food

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will make a huge fall in the demand for it. Obviously, when the

price

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of fast foods raises high, the amount of consumption will go down. If the product

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is high,

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number of

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cannot afford

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product many times like the way it was in the past, which leads to

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lower consumption. From

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scenario, it is believed that imposing a higher tax on detrimental

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can be

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in lowering the amount of consumption.

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, if someone

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junk

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food

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thrice

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a week before, they might eat it twice or one time

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a week.

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, it will encourage

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to cook healthy dishes at

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. Because when the

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of unhealthy

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gets much higher, cooking

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at

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to be a better alternative choice. To illustrate more, if the government impose a higher tax on these foods, they will consider cooking dishes at

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. Because cooking

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is cheaper and even more nutrient for the body.

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result

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they will turn to homemade

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which is cheaper and better for health.

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,

junk

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food

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such

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as burger, fried chickens, from a restaurant

have

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been someone choice for lunch because of its reasonable

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if the

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increase they will eat homemade

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. In conclusion, I completely agree that increasing tariffs on

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fast food

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food

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is an effective way to protect public health by decreasing the demand for

junk

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food

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and encouraging

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people

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to cook healthy

food

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at

home

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.