Some people says that adverting is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people thinks that advertising is so common that we no longer to pay attention to it. Discuss both sides of view and give your own opinion.

According to some, an advert can influence
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and make us buy things regardless of whether they are needed or not. Others think that
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of different types of advertising is that high, that people are not interested in it anymore and do not pay any attention. I believe that
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can persuade anyone to buy anything.
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sphere of marketing or PR do not perceive
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due to their profession.
To begin
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attention. And some of us are ready to buy goods
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if they are promoted and shown on TV or
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the Internet frequently.
For example
, I consider myself as the one who
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easy to persuade to purchase products. Advertising in my browser
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to my requests.
Thus
, when I started to look for a new lipstick, I received pop-up
ads
for a week.
As a result
,
instead
of one, I bought myself two new lipsticks, because they had "completely new
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" and an "incredibly
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price".
However
, advertising
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influences on some professionals, because of their knowledge and experience in
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of goods.
For instance
, according to the latest researches of the Russian newspaper ‘Metro’, only 40% of surveyed bloggers and marketing and PR specialists are ready to buy spontaneously, as well as more than half of them try to analyse how the exact piece of advertising was filmed and which technics were used to create it. Because of
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ads
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usual consumers do, they interpret it
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a job or as a task for
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work. In conclusion, I think, that despite those who works in a marketing sphere and has a professional deformation,
ads
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extremely
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powerful tool on a market and can rule
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desires.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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