Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn news. However, others believe that they can learn news better through other media. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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There has been a lot of discussion on whether social networks could be considered a positive development to research some news. On the one hand, it is understandable that reading printed newspapers
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some advantages.
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, traditional newspapers’ contents are strictly censored before publishing.
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, people are less likely to read some misleading information
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is very popular on the internet.
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, nowadays newspapers are very cheap and easy to find wherever you are. In fact, one sheet of newspaper is just about 20 VND and it is suitable for all people’s
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, there are a variety of benefits when learning news from the media. Primarily, you can bring
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with just a mobile phone. There are several kinds of news on the internet which are suitable for all people like finance, real estate or weather.
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, they are environmentally friendly. If using media
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of newspapers, which means a large number of trees do not have to be cut down annually to produce wood for making paper. In conclusion, given the reason above, I personally think that
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reading on media is convenient.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • news coverage
  • perspectives
  • opinions
  • accessed
  • interactive
  • engaging
  • real-time
  • multimedia
  • combination
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