Many supermarkets are selling more and more imported foods instead of seling locally produ byced foods? What are the reasons for this? İs this positive or a negative development?

In the modern era , everyone wants to eat good and tasty
food
. Everyone wanted to try new foods imported from other
countries
.
Individuals
buy
this
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this product
these products
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products
in many supermarkets . some
food
is imported.
These
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There
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is
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are
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both negative and positive impacts on
society
. These
products
are dangerous for both males and females. There are many side effects. Commencing with my most prominent reason imported
food
is imported from other
countries
. Imported
food
is more expensive than
locally
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local
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products
. Some imported
food
products
buy
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bought
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from
individuals
good is packed people did not check and when open the packing
food
is spoiled.
This
situation People waste the money.
In addition
to protecting imported
food
mix many toxic
products
. Toxic
products
are dangerous for
society
. To indicate , A survey in India prove that Chinese
food
is harmful to
society
.
This
is many bad effects on
individuals
such
as fat , acidity, as well as asthma and many more.
However
imported
food
is expensive or harmful yet masses buy
this
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these
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productproducts
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product products
for taste .
Moreover
, imported
food
is a positive effect that story
countries
economically growth . Imported
food
pay a high tax to the country.
Firstly
overseas
food
travel . Travel agencies become strong financially . After that reach other
countries
. Country
take
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takes
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high tax from
this
food
.
Finally
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individuals
buy overseas items at a high price in the supermarket . Oversea
food
are
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is
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much demanding in India . Oversea
food
is heavy . Individually eat
this
food
in the morning . People did not require any
food
full day . Masses consume time
this
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in this
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situation. In conclusion ,
although
overseas
food
strong financially condition of the country yet ,
society
did not ignore these side effects
such
as harmful as well as expensive.
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