In many countries, women join the army as men do. However, some people argue that the army solely needs males. What is your opinion?

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to their military force but a certain number of the public against
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decision.In my opinion, it is an appreciable movement taken by the government to admission
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to the armed forces.
First
and foremost,
this
enforced law has been decreasing the discrimination between the opposite sex in
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since it proves that a gentlewoman can do whatever a man can.
Moreover
,most of the girls show interest to be a part of a strength and they have been trying to prepare for it since the school level.
For instance
, in India, the government implemented a rule to empower the ladies society to come forward in any
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without
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any hesitations and
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history and many girls are being in the military effort since
then
.
Secondly
, nowadays many organizations head positions led by the girl because they are really confident to handle a crucial situation like a man.In many regions given strict order to appoint noblewoman staff in a significant designation in the forces like army,navy and airforce because of they realised that it would be a remarkable decision to the association which become more powerful in the world.
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, a small number of
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and strongly disagreed on
this
decision since they think that it is ridiculous time because there need physical
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are very much than other works and
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would not handle by a gentlewoman
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last
war that happened in Turkey, the force was led by a girl but she couldn't handle the situation properly and it became lost. In conclusion,there are many positive sides to recruiting a lady to the force and it surpasses the negative side.In
this
century, the girls are shining everywhere and it must happen for the coming days.
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