Living in large cities today poses many problems for people. What are these problems? Should governments encourage more people to live in smaller towns?

The urban trend
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people to find a better life in metropolitan
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made some huge changes in citizens
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in terms of negative impacts
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of
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criminal cases, homeless,
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may play important role in the way to mitigate these issues.
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problems caused by urbanization followed by reason and example and migration
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by government policy.
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population
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cities
becomes a huge problem in almost every
places
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in the world.
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place with a lot of famous
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although
the
population
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is always rise
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up every year, as well as big
areas
in developing countries, like Bangkok or Mumbai.
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the higher income that people should gain, so that,
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gap of economic is unavoidable.
As a result
, thefts, robbing, murder, kidnapping and other criminal issues occur a lot in those big
cities
and keep rising up each year.
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, there are several ways to maintain
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that can be done by authorities. One of the main steps is to conduct transmigration and migration to rural
areas
.
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, citizens that not be able to stand up a better life in big
cities
due to knowledge-based and
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are helped by the governments to make ranch or agricultural fields in rural and village
areas
.
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could make a better income for the country in those sectors, as well.
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, the problem of
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population
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.
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,
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cases are less likely to happen if the economic gap of each social classes
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. To sum up,
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over
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population
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human
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in one big
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to rural
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the main solution that authorities could take to overcome these problems. Policy to develop rural
areas
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benefit
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to rise country revenue.
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