Living in large cities today poses many problems for people. What are these problems? Should governments encourage more people to live in smaller towns?

The urban trend
bring
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people to find a better life in metropolitan
cities
. Urbanization,
undebatedly
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undoubtedly
,
have
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made some huge changes in citizens
life
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in terms of negative impacts
such
as
increasing
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of
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criminal cases, homeless,
also
uncontrolled-growth
population
.
Goverments
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Governments
Government
may play important role in the way to mitigate these issues.
This
essay will discuss
about
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problems caused by urbanization followed by reason and example and migration
solution
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by government policy.
To begin
with,
over-crowded
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the over-crowded
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population
in big
cities
becomes a huge problem in almost every
places
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place
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in the world.
For example
, Los Angeles is well-known as
glamour
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place with a lot of famous
spot
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,
although
the
population
of homeless
is always rise
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up every year, as well as big
areas
in developing countries, like Bangkok or Mumbai.
Furthemore
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Furthermore
, the higher
life-standard
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life standard
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the higher income that people should gain, so that,
huge
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gap of economic is unavoidable.
As a result
, thefts, robbing, murder, kidnapping and other criminal issues occur a lot in those big
cities
and keep rising up each year.
However
, there are several ways to maintain
those problem
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that can be done by authorities. One of the main steps is to conduct transmigration and migration to rural
areas
.
For instance
, citizens that not be able to stand up a better life in big
cities
due to knowledge-based and
formal-qualifications
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are helped by the governments to make ranch or agricultural fields in rural and village
areas
.
This
could make a better income for the country in those sectors, as well.
Consequently
, the problem of
over-crowded
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population
and homeless people can
be mitigate
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.
Moreover
,
crime
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cases are less likely to happen if the economic gap of each social classes
decrease
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. To sum up,
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overpopulation
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over
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overpopulation
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population
, homeless and crime are the results of
over-crowded
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overcrowded
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human
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in one big
areas
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.
Migraton
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Migration
to rural
areas
may
became
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the main solution that authorities could take to overcome these problems. Policy to develop rural
areas
can
also
be
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benefit
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to rise country revenue.
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