Living in large cities today poses many problems for people. What are these problems? Should governments encourage more people to live in smaller towns?

The urban trend

bring

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people to find a better life in metropolitan

cities

. Urbanization,

undebatedly

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undoubtedly

,

have

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made some huge changes in citizens

life

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in terms of negative impacts

such

as

increasing

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of

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criminal cases, homeless,

also

uncontrolled-growth

population

.

Goverments

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Governments

Government

may play important role in the way to mitigate these issues.

This

essay will discuss

about

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problems caused by urbanization followed by reason and example and migration

solution

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solutions

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by government policy.

To begin

with,

over-crowded

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the over-crowded

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population

in big

cities

becomes a huge problem in almost every

places

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in the world.

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, Los Angeles is well-known as

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place with a lot of famous

spot

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,

although

the

population

of homeless

is always rise

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up every year, as well as big

areas

in developing countries, like Bangkok or Mumbai.

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Furthermore

, the higher

life-standard

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life standard

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the higher income that people should gain, so that,

huge

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a huge

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gap of economic is unavoidable.

As a result

, thefts, robbing, murder, kidnapping and other criminal issues occur a lot in those big

cities

and keep rising up each year.

However

, there are several ways to maintain

those problem

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that can be done by authorities. One of the main steps is to conduct transmigration and migration to rural

areas

.

For instance

, citizens that not be able to stand up a better life in big

cities

due to knowledge-based and

formal-qualifications

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are helped by the governments to make ranch or agricultural fields in rural and village

areas

.

This

could make a better income for the country in those sectors, as well.

Consequently

, the problem of

over-crowded

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population

and homeless people can

be mitigate

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be mitigated

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.

Moreover

,

crime

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cases are less likely to happen if the economic gap of each social classes

decrease

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decreases

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. To sum up,

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overpopulation

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over

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overpopulation

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population

, homeless and crime are the results of

over-crowded

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overcrowded

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human

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in one big

areas

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.

Migraton

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Migration

to rural

areas

may

became

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the main solution that authorities could take to overcome these problems. Policy to develop rural

areas

can

also

be

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a benefit

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benefit

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to rise country revenue.