Living in large cities today poses many problems for people. What are these problems? Should governments encourage more people to live in smaller towns?
The urban trend
bring
people to find a better life in metropolitan Change the verb form
brings
cities
. Urbanization, undebatedly
, Correct your spelling
undoubtedly
have
made some huge changes in citizens Change the verb form
has
life
in terms of negative impacts Replace the word
living
such
as increasing
Replace the word
increase
of
criminal cases, homeless, Change preposition
apply
also
uncontrolled-growth population
. Goverments
may play important role in the way to mitigate these issues. Correct your spelling
Governments
Government
This
essay will discuss about
problems caused by urbanization followed by reason and example and migration Remove the preposition
apply
solution
by government policy.
Fix the agreement mistake
solutions
To begin
with, over-crowded
Add an article
the over-crowded
population
in big cities
becomes a huge problem in almost every places
in the world. Fix the agreement mistake
place
For example
, Los Angeles is well-known as glamour
place with a lot of famous Correct article usage
a glamour
spot
, Change to a plural noun
spots
although
the population
of homeless is always rise
up every year, as well as big Change the verb form
is always rising
areas
in developing countries, like Bangkok or Mumbai. Furthemore
, the higher Correct your spelling
Furthermore
life-standard
the higher income that people should gain, so that, Correct your spelling
life standard
huge
gap of economic is unavoidable. Add an article
a huge
the huge
As a result
, thefts, robbing, murder, kidnapping and other criminal issues occur a lot in those big cities
and keep rising up each year.
However
, there are several ways to maintain those problem
that can be done by authorities. One of the main steps is to conduct transmigration and migration to rural Change the determiner
that problem
those problems
areas
. For instance
, citizens that not be able to stand up a better life in big cities
due to knowledge-based and formal-qualifications
are helped by the governments to make ranch or agricultural fields in rural and village Correct your spelling
formal qualifications
areas
. This
could make a better income for the country in those sectors, as well. Consequently
, the problem of over-crowded
Correct article usage
the over-crowded
population
and homeless people can be mitigate
. Change the verb form
be mitigated
Moreover
, crime
cases are less likely to happen if the economic gap of each social classes Replace the word
criminal
decrease
.
To sum up, Change the verb form
decreases
Correct your spelling
overpopulation
over
Correct your spelling
overpopulation
population
, homeless and crime are the results of over-crowded
Correct your spelling
overcrowded
human
in one big Fix the agreement mistake
humans
areas
. Change to a singular noun
area
Migraton
to rural Correct your spelling
Migration
areas
may became
the main solution that authorities could take to overcome these problems. Policy to develop rural Change the verb form
become
areas
can also
be Add an article
a benefit
benefit
to rise country revenue.Replace the word
beneficial
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