The government should reduce the budget on the arts and spend more funds on education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays many
people
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about the finances of the
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people
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education
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section will be more effective
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on the
arts
, whereas others believe reversely. I partially agree that the
government
decline the funds on the
arts
rather than
education
. On the one hand, there are reasons
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spending finances on the
arts
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people
creative. The public can be inspired by admiring numerous artistic works
in particular
places.
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, they
also
can get rid of
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and take a
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hobby by individuals or with other
people
.
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government
should preserve the property of a
nation
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of a country.
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society to get
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them by investing
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the
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, citizens will know the knowledge and
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influences on
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using budget on the
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that
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is the key property of a
nation
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education
, there are many subjects
such
as
mathmetics
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, they propel various contests to encourage students.
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, the investment
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education
is more effective. The
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education
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providing documents, experiments and other resources to
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the
education
rate of a
nation
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education
rate is high means that the economy of a
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has a possibility to be high. In conclusion, while spending funds on
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creativity and can maintain the legacy, it is unavoidable that
education
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education
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